Try and boil down the ultimate point of the essay into a small amount of space – at the most two sentences.
It should be clear enough that every part of your essay will be able to relate to it without much trouble.
Old Spice’s appeal to women makes men want to look and smells like a real man.
The advertisement presents an ideal man as good looking, masculine and romantic.
The advertisement conveys a strong message about a strong personality where a man needs not only to be attractive but also to be confident by smelling like a real man.
The advertisement uses emotional appeal to influence young women who value strong qualities in a man.
The advertisement used sexually themed strategy to grab the reader’s attention.
To write a thesis statement, make sure that you have done all the research you want to do, and that you know everything you want to when it comes to your essay.
That is why the first step is to analyze if the advertisement presents a brief history and a detailed description of what the product is about.
A good advertisement needs to show how the product is superior to other products in the market.